There’s no need to continue trying – your responses are almost completely contradicting what your article implies. Apart from the OOP part, which I addressed already in my initial response.

My suggestion: read the comments you received, go back to work and revisit this article in two years to see if you still agree with yourself. And meanwhile don’t stop writing – it triggers interaction and in my experience we all learn new things every day as long as we keep interacting.

CEO at Schinchoku and software architect at Delphino Consultancy B.V. — writing about software, and about the Shinchoku startup.