You look for advice on writing, and clearly between the lines what you write here your aim is to write articles that people learn from.

Then you decide to take a comedian, who talks about writing jokes — a completely different kind of writing — as an example and you end up disappointed because his advice doesn’t work.

It’s pretty clear what’s wrong here, I think, and it ain’t Jerry’s advice.

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